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I woke up outside of a grave yard it was grey. Then I saw a huge castle behind of me. I felt very scared my legs were shaking like strawberry jelly. It was dark. I couldn't see the floor at all. I kept on walking. Then I saw a man. He tapped my shaking shoulder and said. I am very friendly but sometimes I scare people mind. I'm very sorry. He looked like a old poor man who had know where to go. I just was about to run away. I felt so terrifed. Then the man told me about a very nasty person she was a evil which. Then I said where does she live? she lives in that huge castle behind you. She likes little children so I would be very careful if I was you. I felt so scared I started to cry. Then the man went away and left me alone.

Chapter 2

I bumped into the tree because I couldn't see anything at all. Then suddenly a person grabbed me then I saw it was the nasty which. I thought she was going to kill me. She took me into her huge castle. It had a big brown door. Then their were white big cobwebs all over the walls. Then I saw my friend had been captured too. Then I saw a big chair with spikes on the chair. I thought she was going to sit me down on the chair. Then she started to tie me up with strong rope.When she had went I saw spell books. My friend had some scissors so she said you better go I will stay here. So I cut the ropes and escaped without my best friend. I went without the which noticing. Then I went out of the castle.

By Jade Spooner

One bright, normal school morning, well it was Monday. I slowly woke up very early at seven, like I usually do every school morning. Now, I started to carefully slip my self off my warm bed ,but just as I was doing it, before I touched the floor ,I felt as light as a floating feather .I just reached the floor with the tip of my toe ,then it felt like nothing! I looked down to see if the furry floor was really there ,uhh!My rose red heart started pounding like it was going to come though my thin skin! There was no floor! I had looked down and there was fluffy white clouds! There was no hard floor! Then I looked up again ,but then I heard something very straight it was faint calling of my kind mother calling , wake up !Wake up! Its time to wake up! I felt terrified! First there was no floor ,I woke up and I wasn't in my bedroom and now I can faintly hear my mother! As I heard my gentle mother, I also felt something towering over me ,now I was really scared! I slowly looked up and there ,right in front of my eyes stood a very tall angel. She got me by the hand lifted me up and guided me to a ancient door. The ancient door had spooky cobwebs on and looked very scary.

The tall angel took me in side .I slowly started to shiver because it was cowhite cold .Next I stopped shivering for some reason ,she took me in this other spooky room. The angel gently asked me if we could have a calm talk I nervously said yes. The kind angel was delighted to hear it. She softly told me that she was the only person in the hole wide world who would be able to stop the terrible war in Afghanistan. She said if I help her she will pay me a fair deal ,so I said I would. The next early morning we wearily set off with some of the angels old bags .She had also given me one of her powers to fly! She and I flew over the high roof tops ,past busy towns ,rushing streets and much more. By the next week or so we made it to Afghanistan. The streets and the villages were already set ready ,me and the angel said we must do something quick! But then we felt something towering over us .Then, in sudden shook we yelled very loudly ,the next time I looked the angel was gone.

By Bryony

When I woke up I found myself in a Grave Yard .I felt petrified. The place was weird and looked like a pile of rocks. Then I thought I was in rock land, but when I looked the rock had giant writing on it .Then I realised it was a Grave Yard. I felt horrified.

I saw someone. He had horns on his head, sharp eyes, a twisted nose and a crazy mouth. I felt horrified. Then a friendly rug rat came a long he was cute, looked familiar and he was like a baby his name was Tommy .He told me about a nasty man he had horns on his head, sharp eyes ,a twisted nose and a crazy mouth and he lived in the wood. I felt like I was going to faint like a statue fall from the sky .The friendly person made my horrified I thought he was a nasty person and he was going to kill me and Tommy, then I realised he was nice to me.

Me and my friend Tommy the baby were going to save the world. the man called Goat Bully the man with horn on his head, sharp eyes, a twisted nose and a crazy mouth was going to destroy the world. I thought I heard that when I meant Tommy. Then I look down Tommy was not there. then I looked in the distance Goat Bully was not there. Then something grab me and locked us up. then they locked us up in a cold, damp, smelly cellar for some time. Then I got so sweaty my hands slipped out of the chains and I said to Tommy " I will come a rescue you when ever I can OK" I said .Tommy said"OK". Then I went out of the cold ,damp ,smelly seal. Tommy stared to cry, because he did not wouldn't me to leave.

By Emma

Descriptive Story

Chapter one

I woke up to find myself in a sweet, scented room.It had fluffy, pink curtains.The room had weird wallpaper because it looked liquidy.It had different sweets on it. Also there was some writing saying "Lick the sweets!" I felt unsure and nervous.I touched it first,it felt like water but I did n't think I could fall through.I was to scared to lick it I turned round and jumped a foot in the air just as if there were fireworks on me. "What is the matter? Asked a beautiful lady. "You gave me a shock" I barked.What did she expect? The lady was beautiful.She wore a pink, satin dress.In her hair was a flower chain.She wore a smile and looked friendly.She could n't be dangerous. The lady said"I am Elizabeth!" "That's my middle name!"I cried,"Where on earth am I?" "You are in Fantasy Palace on Dreamy Drop Island ,"she explained."Keep out of the way of if you see Zelly Witch, she is like a shrivelled up prune but powerful.She locks up people!" A shiver went down my spine,that was not nice at all."OH!"I cried.That souned bad, infact, very bad indeed.

Chapter two

"Do you want to go on a walk?"Questioned Elizabeth.   "Yes please."I agreed,"Please, first can I have some breakfast. "Certainly!" Said Elizabeth,"You need nice, silky clothes aswell!"   Elizabeth found a silky dress it was like pink and purple paint, it was very comfortable and relaxing.It was like woven water.   "Thank you!"I gasped,"It is wonderful!" The breakfast was sausages and egg it was all like delious moment.We set of in high,good spirits.Rabbits were like fluffy balls of cotton wool. We then came across a problem, we had fallen down a dingy hole, but had landed in a worse position.We were in cold glass containers.Fortunely there was a hole in mine.I climbed out through it. But there stood Zelly like a tower of doom.I ran like a jet, missing a curse by inches! When I got back to the palace I realised that Elizabeth was still in Zelly's container!

Chapter three

I had to get help from someone.Searching desperatly I came across a group of people I knew to well they were......... Jonah,Emma,Steven,James,Lauren and Vicky.There was big muddle of confusion. "I woke up here" "So did I!" "I was horrified!"And lots more!   Now feeling braver we sorted a plan as if we were Napolion planning an attack. We boldly marched to Zelly's hole and dropped.We landed with a plop!Zelly cackled"Ha!Ha!" Steven and James started with their jokes and hurled Zelly into laughter.She was shaking like an over full hose pipe.Vicky missed a curse by milometres.Jonah, Emma, Lauren and I gave one sharp kick each.Zelly was weak with laughter from Steven and James's jokes.Vicky then grabbed Zelly's wand and snapped it.Then all of us gave one good kick and she went flying into space.We freed Elizabeth!"Thank you!" She said.We then went to the palace with Elizabeth.   Then at nine o'clock we had hot cocoa,joked and then we went to bed. I woke up...    in my house!

By Naomi

Descriptive Story

I woke up and found my self not in my own bed. I was terified and the grave yard was gloomy and pitch black. I walked smoothly and slowly down the crooked path. A coffen squeaked open. Out of it came a large dark figure and then it got closes and closes. My teeth chatted with feer and my teeth chatted again. It was a large gloomy monster witch had a lonely looking smile. I stepped back with fear. The monster spoke in a kind gentel voice. He said "Are you ok? I am Zip the friendly monster. I walked towards him and made friends and he told my about whip the boss of all monsters.

After I felt carm and a bit scared. Then we had a strol round. The moon was shimaring on the clear as cristal pond. The church door was creacking as the wind houled through like a giant pushing the church door. But then disaster struck. The boss came out.We did not have a chans to run. We where circeled with monsters.Green,yellow,red and blue monsters.Then we found our self's in a dark place. Fruit bats flew round like a bird of prey. It felt like it was the end of the world as the hours went by. I felt like I was going to die. Zip was asleep and I managed to askape

After I had ran away I was angry for leaving Zip. So I went back to get him. On the way I found a axe. When I had fianly reached Zip I cut the rope as if I was a woodcutter. We stumbeled out and ran as fast as we could. Soon we had to have a breake. But then we heard someone shouting. When I found out it was a dream I was glad it was, and the shouting was my brother.

I woke up on a dark misty night, but it was not a dark night it was only the trees. That's when I noticed where I was. If you looked at me I looked like a ghost that had just seen a horrible man that killed ghosts. In other words I was scared stiff. I looked around me. There was the sound of birds tweeting and landing in trees and there were bushes and tree trunks everywhere. I suddenly noticed where I was. I was in a big, wide Jungle. I felt like I was going to faint because I have never, ever been in a jungle before and I never heard of a jungle before, apishly one this big. Suddenly I a faint, pale noise behind me I quickly turned around but there was no body there I felt a little nerves. So I carried on walking, but then the noise came back. I turned around tripping over while I was doing this and then when I looked up I saw a tall man with glasses and he was dressed in black. My heart was beating like a kangaroo bouncing on the floor hard. He sat me down and said he was friendly I felt a sigh of relief. Then he started telling me about an evil sintist who wanted too rule and take over the world and destroy it to get money and he wanted lots.

Chapter two

As we were walking along the dusty road there came a sound like some body screaming out VERY loud. So me and my friend ran like a pack of howling wolfs chasing something for dinner. When we got there I was shocked. I saw this horrible looking thing coming forwards to us. I paniced like mad I did not now what to do the big thing was coming.

By Katrina

Class 4