Wednesday 5th May 1999

Persuasive Writing

We have been writing advertisements to persuade people to visit a place. Please read this and decide whether you would visit.

Enjoy Delightful Debdale

Take a two day trip to the traditional State of Debdale on the coast of Hawaii.

Drink the tropical fruit juice and let it tingle your taste buds and relax you on

the sparkling smooth beach.But you cannot relax for ever for you will be

taking a lesson of super surf boarding in the transparent crystal oceans.

Day One: To start your trip you will be bathing beside the luxurious cool swimming pool with a full American breakfast including a tasty refreshing traditional coconut drink.

Next you will be taken by an air conditioned coach to visit an active volcano where you can explore the natural rocks and formations as you stroll through the rubble.

As you stop off for a leisurely BBQ on the golden beaches, you can enjoy the warm afternoon sun in the shade of a palm tree.

You will not be relaxing for long as you will be taken off for a wild surfing trip in the cool waves of the Pacific Ocean. This will include a full lesson with a top surf boarding instructor.

The evening entertainment will be starting at 9.00pm and continuing until the early hours of the morning (for the party animals only!). You can watch the colourful sunrise rising from the horizon over the tall palm trees.

DAY TWO: The morning will commence with a sight-seeing tour of the tropical island on an open top bus. Stopping off at different points will able you to take memorable photographs of the ancient monuments.

You can take a break from all the action by wondering around the unique shopping mall where you can buy priceless souvenirs of your adventure.

In the warm magnificent evening you can enjoy your last night with traditional dancing with local people demonstrating their amazing dancing skills.

How to prepare:The cost of the trip is the unbelievable price of £400.This includes...

.Full 5 star accommodation at a top quality hotel.

.All superb activities.

.The aeroplane flight there and back inclusive in price.

Have a nice trip!

Thursday 6th May

This is Group 2's continuation of the Lottie Project by Jacqueline Wilson. It is not finished so any suggestions for the ending are welcome.

The Lottie Project

by Scott, Laurence, Brett, Sammi-Jo, David and Joseph

I walked over to the desk next to Jamie. His irritatingly perfect expression annoyed me immediately, I clenched my fists and resisted the temptation to block his airways with my clammy palms. The thought of sitting next to him all year sent a shiver down my spine. His posh eyes stared into my common eyes and made me blood vessels burst like an erupting volcano.

I watched Miss Beckworth's huge mouth begin to open, in slow motion, and the most dreaded word came out, "HISTORY!" The sleepy children's eyes instantly awoke from their peaceful day dreaming and the odour of new books filled the air.

In Charlie's head a plan began to emerge. She rose her hand to offer her assistance in giving out the new books. Immediately Miss Beckworth saw the potential in Charlotte to become her personal helper. The cogs in Charlie's sharp mind began to vigorously turn. If she was going to become a true goodie goodie, then she must become like Jamie and his geeky club.

"Charlotte, why haven't you started your work yet? If you don't do enough you will need to stay in at break..........Charlotte..........Charlotte......CHARLOTTE!"

Charlie woke out of her trance and looked over at Jamie's work to copy it.

Friday 7th May 1999

Girls' Football Team

We were terrified,most of us hadn't played in a tournament before, but as soon as we heard the ref(Mr.Tomkow)blow the whistle, we soon set off running up and down the pitch .Every player was brilliant and the goalie Sarah.K was exceptionally talented, she saved every shot except for one which gave us the place of 6th out of 11teams.We tried our best .In every game(apart from the last 1-0)we had a score of 0,0. We all enjoyed playing even though we didn't come first place,but we can feel how hard we played today though!

We want to thank the parents and everyone else who supported us on 6th May 1999 so THANKS!

We are very grateful for your encouragment.

By Sammi-Jo and Stacey.