One morning at school there was a new student called James. 
"Do you want to be our friend?" asked Tom and Geoff.
"Yes," said James.  After school Tom and Geoff showed James Aquila that was at Tom's house. Tom asked his mum if Geoff and James could stay the night.
"Okay but you have to ask your  parents," said Tom's mum.  So
Geoff and James asked their mums if they could stay the night.  They both said yes.  At night James wanted to have a ride in Aquila.
"Okay," said Tom.  When they got in Aquila they found a new button that took them to space.  When they were in space they found the planet Mars.  They all decided to try and build a space station. They found a flat space where they could build a space station.  They were going to build it because they wanted to study space.  They went back to earth in Aquila and they found a scientist lab.
"Can we have some things to build a space station on Mars?" asked  Geoff.
"Yes," said the scientist.  "There is some bits of old space stations over there."
"Thank you" said Tom.  So they kept coming back to earth to get more bits. When they had all the bits they started making the space station. When they were tired they stopped.  At night an alien came and broke all the space station because he doesn't want them living on Mars.  At daytime Tom, Geoff and James kept on repairing the space station.  At night James saw the alien and it ran away.  James told Tom and Geoff and they followed it to where it lived.  In the morning they put their hands in the glove compartment to make them strong.  They walked towards where the alien lived.  They lifted up his hiding place and threw it into the middle of space.  So they went back and started building the space station and started studying space in peace.

By William and Alan
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