The Adventures of LiteStar
An interactive story of a holoboy and his friends
Alien Attack - Part 1
By Andrew Davenport
The Meeting
Lite Star pulled out his computer.
"We’re on a asteroid planet," said LiteStar
"Which one?" asked Jenny.
"Hang on …Zotermere." replied LiteStar.
"How are we going to get home?" asked Jenny.
"I’ll look on my computer. Well… there is a city not very far from here. If
we go 109,60° we’ll get there," replied LiteStar.
"And we’ll get a transport home," said Jenny excitedly.
"Well let’s go," said LiteStar.
25 Minutes Later
"Look," said Jenny "see that bright light over there!"
"Oh yes," said LiteStar. "Lets explore."
3 Minutes Later
"I’m thirsty," said Jenny.
"Let’s go into that bar there," said LiteStar.
"So you want a ship then?" said Zeron.
"Yes," said LiteStar.
"Well that will be 12 Thousand Credits," said Zeron.
"17," said LiteStar.
"Okay you’ve got yourself a ship. Follow me to the docking bay,’’ said
Zeron.
1 Hour Later
They were in the darkness of space.
"Let’s move into light speed," said Zeron.
Then 
Two Minutes Later
They got out of the ship on their asteroid of 9c5. They paid Zeron and went into the biosphere.......................
1 o’clock in the Morning
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The linking corridor was blown off the asteroid. "Quick Alien fighters. Man the turrets," said LiteStar. |
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"Oh no! They’ve shut down the main reactor. We’re doomed
for sure. We’re going down towards that small planet over there, " said Jenny "Just shut up and keep firing" said LiteStar. |
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An enemy fighter blew up in a cloud of fire. |
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Another enemy fighter blew up in a shower of sparks. "Retreat," said the enemy leader. |
They smashed into the side of the planet.
"Run!" said LiteStar. "She’s gonna blow!"
The
asteroid blew up like a fantastic firework display.
"What are we going to do now?" said Jenny.
"Find some civilisation on this planet," said LiteStar
2 Hours Later
"Look," said LiteStar. A police hover car just swooshed over their heads. The
car pulled up about 50 zeons away and came back fast. The police car screeched to a halt.
"What in the crazes is going on?" said the policeman.
"Please help us." Said Jenny "Our asteroid we lived on has been destroyed
by these evil fighter pilots."
"So you are part of the alliance?" said the police.
"Yes," Said LiteStar
"Well I hate the alliance. Get in the back." said the policeman holding a super
intensity laser.
"Please don't shoot," said Jenny getting into the back of the police car.
"come on LiteStar they’ve got us." Clank. The cell door closed.
"You will stay in this cell until your execution." Said the police officer…
9 Hours Later…
Suddenly the ground shook violently, as if they were inside a gigantic drum, and
someone was beating it with all their might.
It sounded like a giants footsteps as there was a short pause between each bang.
……
Then there was a huge explosion, and the wall of the cell was blown away! Jenny was shot across the cell and into a wall, and was hit in her hard light drive. The impact reduced her to a pile of guts and metal, gore and steel, blood and battery fluid…
LiteStar looked through the blasted hole in the wall, and saw a horrific sight… A huge mechanical war machine, which had reverse joint legs. It had 2 Long Range Missile packs on it shoulders each capable of firing 20 missiles in each blast…
It also had a salvo of lasers in each arm and 4 Particle Projection Cannons (PPCs) plus 2 LBX Autocannons.
LiteStar ran to a plane no one followed because they were all fighting the mech and he took off into intergalactic space.
Chapter by Andrew Davenport
English Martyrs' RC Primary School, Biddulph, Stoke-on-Trent, Staffordshire
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